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SilkCrimsonMoon
 Post subject: My New Poem
PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 4:45 am 
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These days I just feel very strange and tired, much more strange and tired than before. So I wrote this poem:

"Beneath The Sufferance"

In the vast glare of emptiness I sought the profound thoughts of eternity
Eternity, a river that glows and the sun that was never there…


Illusions of wisdom and strength…
A road to perdition, which denies the essence of I, in “I” itself,

The contemplation of death and birth…
The tragedy that was meant to be…
I in solitude and…

And the “I”, that Vanishes…

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Goat
 Post subject: Re: My New Poem
PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 11:25 am 
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Define Infinity wrote:
These days I just feel very strange and tired, much more strange and tired than before. So I wrote this poem:

"Beneath The Sufferance"

In the vast glare of emptiness I sought the profound thoughts of eternity
Eternity, a river that glows and the sun that was never there…


Illusions of wisdom and strength…
A road to perdition, which denies the essence of I, in “I” itself,

The contemplation of death and birth…
The tragedy that was meant to be…
I in solitude and…

And the “I”, that Vanishes…


Pretty good. Keep them coming! :D
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I'm not the peom type of guy but that i liked
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SilkCrimsonMoon
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