Carnifex Umbris wrote:
Misha wrote:
Carnifex Umbris wrote:
Azrael wrote:
Carnifex: go ahead, but be gentle, no one likes to see a man cry

You actually have pretty good grammar, except for the capitalization thing. I can't give you any help with the writing section; they instituted that after I graduated (I feel old now).
Would you mind another pupil?
Nope. Though there's not much for you to learn; just follow my vocabulary building advice.
Quick, what does "rapacious" mean?
Ok, thanks. I have no clue about what "rapacious" means, but I don't think I'll need it a lot

. My problem is that I don't always know when to place a comma, when to use "these", "this", "that", and "those", and which out of "that" and "which" should be placed in perticular sentences. Word's spell-check should be able to take care of most of the rest, and there's a dictionary for the meaning of words. Oh, I also have trouble feeling what "time" to use; simple present, past perfect, you know what I mean. I try to fill in all of these things based on feeling, but the problem is that I'm not English and that my feeling therefore sucks. When writing messages like these, I really don't care a lot, but I think a review should contain perfect English.