Metalhead_Bastard wrote:
Hmmm, well I guess that I'll be the sole voter for now. :!:
I hope you're not
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| Author: | crast [ Sat Mar 18, 2006 12:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | The Tourney 3: Match 6, Round 1 - Crast vs Slayer of Kings |
the legacy indivisible patterns meld chaotic , neurotic the purity once found now poisoned the soul of my thoughts behind all decisions lie our meld, our legacy through screams of perversion the discovery of oneself my chthonic mind, everlasting in self preservation lies our selfish ways the thoughts and ideas dwell within us all to gather the feeble, and destroy smouldering masses question our ways nevermore, my explanation now void tenebrous words used for dismissal we are not of this world we are not to be of this world once more, the delight ruins us disgust holds no limits our legacy, once rare and prodigious now collapsed and deteriorated we are our own demise A work in progress I guess. Lyrics take very long for me to write, by the time this ends up on the Canopy album[Serene Catharsis - recording now] it will be somewhat different. Figure May/June and you will be able to hear how this is in my mind... .:crast:. |
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| Author: | Anonymous [ Sat Mar 18, 2006 1:41 pm ] |
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Sculpting the Anti-Form (Birth of a God) wrote: Where am I? Where? ...Am I?
Am I my own procreation unknown? It reeks of oblivion - and strings of thought unformed in a contenting mindset anti-aesthetic anaesthetic 'I' Uniformly invisible yet clearly malformed Am I hideous? Am I, at all? To begin with, I will never end And finally... not again. anti-aesthetic anaesthetic 'I' sculpted with smiles (that were) content without form. A mirror would cast but an idea Self-sufficient thoughts of another Carried for all immortality Thus spawning the divine in me. anti-aesthetic anaesthetic 'I' sculpted with reverence and formal continuation (of God) I hope it makes some sense (it does to me). I've been depressed for an entire week as I am apparently half deaf in my left ear after a rehearsal. I haven't been able to think of much beside my fear of losing the ability to appreciate music; I'm sure some of you will understand that fear. Nevertheless, that's my poem up there, it deals with the birthing of a god, how it might regard itself, and how it depends upon others to exist in the first place. There's more to be found in there, so I hope you will make an effort to understand some of it. |
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| Author: | NewFriendAncientEnemy [ Sat Mar 18, 2006 6:38 pm ] |
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Good poems, guys, I'll vote later, maybe/maybenot. Lightning struck twice, and now, thanks to my brother and an uninvited guest, the only working computer in my home is busted. Don't know if it's fixable, but I can do small stuff from the library. I just wanna apologize for this crap. I'll be back in the next 48hrs to confirm whether or not I'll be able to continue running this thing... Poorly as it may be. I was enjoying myself. And thanks, Crast, for handling the posting of this business. OFC |
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| Author: | Metalhead_Bastard [ Sat Mar 18, 2006 7:14 pm ] |
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NFAE, if you can't (I hope you can!) keep on running this thing then maybe somebody else with the know how could. I vote Crast, it was the atmosphere as a whole which got me...Especially this: Quote: once more, the delight ruins us
disgust holds no limits Good work, though to both of you. |
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| Author: | Eyesore [ Sat Mar 18, 2006 8:12 pm ] |
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Hmmm...I really like both. anti-aesthetic anaesthetic 'I' Definitely a cool line. I'll vote later. |
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| Author: | lizardtail [ Sat Mar 18, 2006 8:14 pm ] |
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Yeah, I'm not quite ready to vote yet either. Crast's lyrics strikingly remind me of Meshuggah lyrics, and that's no bad thing.. |
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| Author: | Metalhead_Bastard [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:04 pm ] |
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Hmmm, well I guess that I'll be the sole voter for now. :!: |
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| Author: | Anonymous [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:07 pm ] |
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Metalhead_Bastard wrote: Hmmm, well I guess that I'll be the sole voter for now. :!:
I hope you're not
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| Author: | Metalhead_Bastard [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:08 pm ] |
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Slayer Of Kings wrote: Metalhead_Bastard wrote: Hmmm, well I guess that I'll be the sole voter for now. :!: I hope you're not Nobody has the GUTS to vote like MEN/MANLY WOMEN, they're all AFRAID. Maybe that'll get things going.
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| Author: | Rhys [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:19 pm ] |
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Slayer of Kings gets my vote. Its a tie! |
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| Author: | Goat [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:39 pm ] |
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Slayer gets my ballot. And in the competition too, ho ho ho. |
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| Author: | Stefan [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:56 pm ] |
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S O K it is he slayed the poor .:crast:. :cry: NP Iron Maiden "Killers" (the classics never lie) |
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| Author: | lizardtail [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 2:21 pm ] |
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the soul of my thoughts behind all decisions lie our meld, our legacy I vote for Crast this time, I didn't find anything that personally poignant in Slayer's poem. |
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| Author: | Anonymous [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 3:17 pm ] |
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lizardtail wrote: I vote for Crast this time, I didn't find anything that personally poignant in Slayer's poem.
I wouldn't expect of you to think of yourself as a god
'Tis an exciting competition, may the best man win. I'm glad our poems are similar in length and style. |
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| Author: | Kathaarian [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 3:18 pm ] |
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My vote = S.o.K . Crast did a good job too. |
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| Author: | Dead Machine [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 4:14 pm ] |
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Slayer sounds like Haake, so he's the clear winner here. |
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| Author: | Fingon [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 5:12 pm ] |
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Slayer of Kings! PS: Zie dat je de belgische eer verdedigt als ik er uit lig!
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| Author: | Carnifex Umbris [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 6:04 pm ] |
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Another close one. Slayer of Kings. |
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| Author: | Anonymous [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 7:30 pm ] |
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Crasts was a bit more ambitious.. SOKs evoked some nice vocal deliveries and was a teeny bit tighter. SOK. Although I think I'd vote for Crast's final version. |
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| Author: | Misha [ Sun Mar 19, 2006 7:52 pm ] |
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I have no clue what to vote... I'll wait a bit... |
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