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White Cold Fire

Touches of white pins in the spreading limbs
Is this the thread that binds us?
This winter has seen no snow
And bloodlines bring only madness from the moon.

Egress is impossible without ingress
Leaving again and again
Screaming that the void be filled
With nothing but broken mirrors.

Unblinking shining eyes
Reflect my own windows
The picture creases and bleeds
You are only deep water.

The slamming of the door
Dredges me out of sleep
My limbs are paralyzed
With the energy of impotent rage.

Even temporary madness leaves its marks
And I still feel those grey matter tracks
Etched as with soft acid
Old winds are blowing.

IN RIDDLES COME WORDS

The old man spoke in riddles
abound in waves
to the oncoming traffic
lights the way for our journey
to the other side
of an unknown
time lost
on the road to peace
of mind
if he walks in your footsteps
in the sand
castle on the hill
top of the world
full of fear
of the dark
corner in the room
with no windows
to the outside
looking in
on the children
playing games in the forest
beyond the river
runs cold and wild
eyes staring left and right
down another tall one
more for the cause
the extinction of an old
time for an old man
and his insane words

IN THEORY

I should be able to fill
this page with many words

I should be able to—
In theory

I vote Eyesore because of :

Quote:

IN THEORY

I should be able to fill
this page with many words

I should be able to—
In theory

8)

NP
Great Jewish Music Serge Gainsbourg

Stefan wrote:

I vote Eyesore because of :

Quote:

IN THEORY

I should be able to fill
this page with many words

I should be able to—
In theory

8)

NP
Great Jewish Music Serge Gainsbourg

That's not what he posted though.

Metalhead_Bastard wrote:

Stefan wrote:

I vote Eyesore because of :

Quote:

IN THEORY

I should be able to fill
this page with many words

I should be able to—
In theory

8)

NP
Great Jewish Music Serge Gainsbourg

That's not what he posted though.

he posted it anyway, didn't he ? :roll: plus I didn't like the "real" poems... :oops:

ONE poem only. Even if Eyesore didn't want it to influence the voters, some dummies are influenced by it.

Vote : Carny.

I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that.

And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry!

Zad wrote:

And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry!

If you really want to vote, you can always forfeit :wink:

ONE poem only. Even if Eyesore didn't want it to influence the voters, some dummies are influenced by it.

Kathaarian wrote:

Vote : Carny.

I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that.

I don't know...it's not bad, but is a bit too gimmicky for me.

And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry!

Zad wrote:

Kathaarian wrote:

Vote : Carny.

I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that.

I don't know...it's not bad, but is a bit too gimmicky for me.

Gimmicky? How so? What's the gimmick?

Quote:

And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry!

True.

Eyesore wrote:

Zad wrote:

Kathaarian wrote:

Vote : Carny.

I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that.

I don't know...it's not bad, but is a bit too gimmicky for me.

Gimmicky? How so? What's the gimmick?

Quote:

And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry!

True.

Short poem with a little twist. You'll probably flame me for this, but it doesn't seem like much work went in.

Zad wrote:

Eyesore wrote:

Zad wrote:

Kathaarian wrote:

Vote : Carny.

I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that.

I don't know...it's not bad, but is a bit too gimmicky for me.

Gimmicky? How so? What's the gimmick?

Quote:

And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry!

True.

Short poem with a little twist. You'll probably flame me for this, but it doesn't seem like much work went in.

Oh, wait, you're talking about the short poem? Well, there's no gimmick, but you're correct, not much work went in. I sat and thought about what to write for a while and drew a blank, so I just started typing, 20 seconds later In Theory was written. Hahaha.

Author:	NewFriendAncientEnemy [ Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:21 pm ]
Post subject:	Tourney 3-Round 2, Match 2(10): Eyesore vs Carnifex(Reserve)
WELCOME TO ROUND TWO!! Things are off to a slow start.... Let's change that, MMM'kay? DONT HIT ME~! And now, business: Okay, here's how it will work. For the next 24 hours, Carnifex and Eyesore will have just that! Exactly 24 hours to post a poem/set of lyrics. The second both poems are posted, THE JUDGES are free to vote. Please make your vote obvious, and be nice! Voting will end exactly 48 hours from now. 1 poem vs 1 poem One vote per JUDGE. Happy writing, all! "Now" on tap: Eyesore vs Carnifex Up next: Zad vs Slayer of Kings

Author:	Carnifex Umbris [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 4:57 am ]
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I'm exhausted from driving nine hours back up to school, so this might suck. I can't tell. Quote: White Cold Fire Touches of white pins in the spreading limbs Is this the thread that binds us? This winter has seen no snow And bloodlines bring only madness from the moon. Egress is impossible without ingress Leaving again and again Screaming that the void be filled With nothing but broken mirrors. Unblinking shining eyes Reflect my own windows The picture creases and bleeds You are only deep water. The slamming of the door Dredges me out of sleep My limbs are paralyzed With the energy of impotent rage. Even temporary madness leaves its marks And I still feel those grey matter tracks Etched as with soft acid Old winds are blowing.

Author:	Eyesore [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 6:43 am ]
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Here you go: Quote: IN RIDDLES COME WORDS The old man spoke in riddles abound in waves to the oncoming traffic lights the way for our journey to the other side of an unknown time lost on the road to peace of mind if he walks in your footsteps in the sand castle on the hill top of the world full of fear of the dark corner in the room with no windows to the outside looking in on the children playing games in the forest beyond the river runs cold and wild eyes staring left and right down another tall one more for the cause the extinction of an old time for an old man and his insane words Try to find the meaning. I was going to post this one: Quote: IN THEORY I should be able to fill this page with many words I should be able to— In theory Hahaha. I decided against it, though, considering I'm up against a toughie.

Author:	Metalhead_Bastard [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 10:27 am ]
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I'm not quite sure how 'metal' it is, but I vote Eyesore.

Author:	Stefan [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 10:31 am ]
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I vote Eyesore because of : Quote: IN THEORY I should be able to fill this page with many words I should be able to— In theory 8) NP Great Jewish Music Serge Gainsbourg

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Author:	Stefan [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 10:37 am ]
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Metalhead_Bastard wrote: Stefan wrote: I vote Eyesore because of : Quote: IN THEORY I should be able to fill this page with many words I should be able to— In theory 8) NP Great Jewish Music Serge Gainsbourg That's not what he posted though. he posted it anyway, didn't he ? :roll: plus I didn't like the "real" poems... :oops:

Author:	Anonymous [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 11:01 am ]
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ONE poem only. Even if Eyesore didn't want it to influence the voters, some dummies are influenced by it.

Author:	Goat [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 11:25 am ]
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Slayer Of Kings wrote: ONE poem only. Even if Eyesore didn't want it to influence the voters, some dummies are influenced by it. YEAH! If I could vote, I'd vote Carny. (edited)

Author:	Kathaarian [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 11:29 am ]
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Vote : Carny. I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that.

Author:	Goat [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 11:34 am ]
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Kathaarian wrote: Vote : Carny. I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that. I don't know...it's not bad, but is a bit too gimmicky for me. And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry!

Author:	ganeshaRules [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 12:05 pm ]
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My vote goes for eyesore long poem. I consider the short one as no valid, but is better than the long one. And I found really better the two they send in first round.... miles away better than these two.

Author:	Anonymous [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 12:05 pm ]
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Zad wrote: And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry! If you really want to vote, you can always forfeit

Author:	Goat [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 2:31 pm ]
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Slayer Of Kings wrote: Zad wrote: And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry! If you really want to vote, you can always forfeit That's very kind of you, but I think I'll survive without voting here.

Author:	Eyesore [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 7:30 pm ]
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Slayer Of Kings wrote: ONE poem only. Even if Eyesore didn't want it to influence the voters, some dummies are influenced by it. You know, I really like that In Theory one, but first, you all complained that my last one was short. Second, I didn't think it would translate well on here. You guys are weird. Hahaha.

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Author:	Eyesore [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 7:31 pm ]
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Zad wrote: Kathaarian wrote: Vote : Carny. I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that. I don't know...it's not bad, but is a bit too gimmicky for me. Gimmicky? How so? What's the gimmick? Quote: And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry! True.

Author:	Goat [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 7:34 pm ]
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Eyesore wrote: Zad wrote: Kathaarian wrote: Vote : Carny. I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that. I don't know...it's not bad, but is a bit too gimmicky for me. Gimmicky? How so? What's the gimmick? Quote: And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry! True. Short poem with a little twist. You'll probably flame me for this, but it doesn't seem like much work went in.

Author:	Eyesore [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 7:40 pm ]
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Zad wrote: Eyesore wrote: Zad wrote: Kathaarian wrote: Vote : Carny. I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that. I don't know...it's not bad, but is a bit too gimmicky for me. Gimmicky? How so? What's the gimmick? Quote: And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry! True. Short poem with a little twist. You'll probably flame me for this, but it doesn't seem like much work went in. Oh, wait, you're talking about the short poem? Well, there's no gimmick, but you're correct, not much work went in. I sat and thought about what to write for a while and drew a blank, so I just started typing, 20 seconds later In Theory was written. Hahaha.

Author:	Goat [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 7:42 pm ]
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Eyesore wrote: Zad wrote: Eyesore wrote: Zad wrote: Kathaarian wrote: Vote : Carny. I could have voted for Ken's second little poem if he posted only that. I don't know...it's not bad, but is a bit too gimmicky for me. Gimmicky? How so? What's the gimmick? Quote: And I've just recalled that we're not supposed to be voting in this round, but the judges are. Sorry! True. Short poem with a little twist. You'll probably flame me for this, but it doesn't seem like much work went in. Oh, wait, you're talking about the short poem? Well, there's no gimmick, but you're correct, not much work went in. I sat and thought about what to write for a while and drew a blank, so I just started typing, 20 seconds later In Theory was written. Hahaha. Yeah, not the longer one.