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Author:  SilkCrimsonMoon [ Mon May 15, 2006 4:45 am ]
Post subject:  My New Poem

These days I just feel very strange and tired, much more strange and tired than before. So I wrote this poem:

"Beneath The Sufferance"

In the vast glare of emptiness I sought the profound thoughts of eternity
Eternity, a river that glows and the sun that was never there…


Illusions of wisdom and strength…
A road to perdition, which denies the essence of I, in “I” itself,

The contemplation of death and birth…
The tragedy that was meant to be…
I in solitude and…

And the “I”, that Vanishes…

Author:  Goat [ Mon May 15, 2006 11:25 am ]
Post subject:  Re: My New Poem

Define Infinity wrote:
These days I just feel very strange and tired, much more strange and tired than before. So I wrote this poem:

"Beneath The Sufferance"

In the vast glare of emptiness I sought the profound thoughts of eternity
Eternity, a river that glows and the sun that was never there…


Illusions of wisdom and strength…
A road to perdition, which denies the essence of I, in “I” itself,

The contemplation of death and birth…
The tragedy that was meant to be…
I in solitude and…

And the “I”, that Vanishes…


Pretty good. Keep them coming! :D

Author:  stuartn15ted [ Wed May 17, 2006 4:46 am ]
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I'm not the peom type of guy but that i liked

Author:  SilkCrimsonMoon [ Wed May 17, 2006 5:45 pm ]
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Cheers.

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