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Author: | SilkCrimsonMoon [ Mon May 15, 2006 4:45 am ] |
Post subject: | My New Poem |
These days I just feel very strange and tired, much more strange and tired than before. So I wrote this poem: "Beneath The Sufferance" In the vast glare of emptiness I sought the profound thoughts of eternity Eternity, a river that glows and the sun that was never there… Illusions of wisdom and strength… A road to perdition, which denies the essence of I, in “I” itself, The contemplation of death and birth… The tragedy that was meant to be… I in solitude and… And the “I”, that Vanishes… |
Author: | Goat [ Mon May 15, 2006 11:25 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: My New Poem |
Define Infinity wrote: These days I just feel very strange and tired, much more strange and tired than before. So I wrote this poem:
"Beneath The Sufferance" In the vast glare of emptiness I sought the profound thoughts of eternity Eternity, a river that glows and the sun that was never there… Illusions of wisdom and strength… A road to perdition, which denies the essence of I, in “I” itself, The contemplation of death and birth… The tragedy that was meant to be… I in solitude and… And the “I”, that Vanishes… Pretty good. Keep them coming! ![]() |
Author: | stuartn15ted [ Wed May 17, 2006 4:46 am ] |
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I'm not the peom type of guy but that i liked |
Author: | SilkCrimsonMoon [ Wed May 17, 2006 5:45 pm ] |
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Cheers. |
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