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| Author: | Anonymous [ Wed May 30, 2007 11:23 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Poetry Competition: unknownkadath666 vs Jaden |
Zad said to start this if he didn't in time. Here's mine: Sunday Omniscient arms massage my back, As I lay face down on concrete flats, And the sun has never felt so warm, As it has today – at half past four. I opposed the elder’s words of wise, And his pensive look revealed disguise, Of worry for my restless soul, Or a mirror to the man inside. So I looked up to the highest high, Far past the freshly painted sky, And saw God staring back at me, With the eyes that were my own. And I fell facedown on concrete flats, With a smile – and a freedom that would last. |
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| Author: | unknownkadath666 [ Thu May 31, 2007 2:09 am ] |
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man, I drew up some stiff competition. Here goes: Hell is Ice Hell hath no fury no wrenching, torturous flames belched from furnaces fury, anger, strife these can be born by man as they burn the mortal coil they warm in a foreign manner the blank stare, emotionless no anger, contempt when at it's zenith freezes the marrow dealing blows, more grievous and complete than all wrath Hell is ice |
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| Author: | Mintrude [ Thu May 31, 2007 8:35 am ] |
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Jaden. |
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| Author: | Anonymous [ Thu May 31, 2007 10:18 am ] |
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Jaden. |
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| Author: | OldSchool [ Thu May 31, 2007 11:09 am ] |
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unknownkadath666, though it would have worked better with a different title. |
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| Author: | Goat [ Thu May 31, 2007 11:14 am ] |
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It's a hard choice, but I'm going to have to vote for Jaden, although unknown's was pretty good. |
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| Author: | Rhys [ Thu May 31, 2007 11:20 am ] |
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Agreed on Uknowns title. Other than that i preffered it. btw u did mean 'fury' not 'furry' right? Unknown. |
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| Author: | noodles [ Thu May 31, 2007 5:41 pm ] |
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Unknown |
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| Author: | Misha [ Thu May 31, 2007 5:52 pm ] |
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Jaden |
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| Author: | unknownkadath666 [ Thu May 31, 2007 11:28 pm ] |
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following the reaper wrote: Agreed on Uknowns title. Other than that i preffered it. btw u did mean 'fury' not 'furry' right?
Unknown. Correct. I amm an ace at typing |
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| Author: | Antonakis [ Fri Jun 01, 2007 2:13 am ] |
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Damn, for once both poems are actually good!! But Jaden's poem is unbeatable in my opinion, one of the very best I've read lately so my vote goes to Jaden. |
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| Author: | SilkCrimsonMoon [ Fri Jun 01, 2007 6:23 am ] |
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| Author: | Goat [ Sun Jun 03, 2007 11:43 am ] |
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Ok, with apologies for my lateness, the results is: Jaden got 5 votes unknownkadath666 got 3 votes Therefore Jaden wins this match! |
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