Metal Reviews

Hello everyone

Hope you are all well

Innerdream has recorded a demo of a new song – Road to Glory – as always, your feedback on the song all areas (guitars, drums, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc) is most welcome

This is only a 1st draft demo and the final version will have the other band members featuring on the track

The link is below

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... dID=252119

Lyrics

I'll break through this endless misery
I'll break through the lies and now I'm free
The battle's almost there to be won
We'll fight and we'll set our people free

Show me a sign and I'll break free through the lies

Here you stand before me with the eternal sky
I feel it in the air, our history born tonight
On this road to glory the battle never ends
We will stand and fight until the day we die

I'll ride through the fields that once were lost
This time victory will soon be ours
The battle's almost there to be won
This time I'll fulfill my destiny

Show me a sign and I'll break free through the lies

On this road to glory we stand tall
On this road to glory we shall never fall

Here you stand before me with the eternal sky
I feel it in the air, our history born tonight
On this road to glory the battle never ends
We will stand and fight until the day we die

(c) PFM 24/05/2006

Oh man. I'm trying to find something good to say about this, but I honestly can't. You honestly need to drop kick your vocalist. He has absolutely no range, and to top it off he is off key on the really easy notes. I guess the only positive thing I can say about this is the guitar solo fits well with the song. But the song hurts my ears, so that isn't saying much. Sorry dude, but this really needs work.

Cheers for taking a listen and posting your comments

I agree we need to find a new singer ASAP

I honestly think you guys have a lot of potential, but as ness said, you need to axe the vocalist asap, the guy can't sing. I really liked your leads, they were very nice. Other then the vocals there is only one thing i would change and that is the drums. I think their pretty dire, a more agressive (in other words faster) sound would pick the songs up quite alot.

Yeah I agree with what you've said about the song

The drums are from a a drum program so hopefully when our drummer records his live drums the songs will take on a much more aggressive and live feel