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Author: | Metalhead_Bastard [ Sun May 03, 2009 2:42 pm ] |
Post subject: | My attempt... |
...at writing a song that isn't thrash! I don't know what genre it is, but I've been listening to a lot of Sabbath and Danzig recently, so that kind of shows I reckon. Criticism or whatever would be nice... http://www.megaupload.com/?d=CI3NIF6R |
Author: | cry of the banshee [ Mon May 04, 2009 5:12 am ] |
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Cool. has potential, a few parts need a bit cleaning up, but it has a nice doomy feel to it. Keep it up. What equipment are you using? My amp just blew and I have been taking advantage (read: mourning the loss) of the situation by cleaning up my technique, since sans amp and distortion + note clarity is the key. |
Author: | Rhys [ Mon May 04, 2009 11:02 am ] |
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The intro sounds like the intro to a Drudkh song ![]() |
Author: | Metalhead_Bastard [ Mon May 04, 2009 2:38 pm ] |
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cry of the banshee wrote: Cool.
has potential, a few parts need a bit cleaning up, but it has a nice doomy feel to it. Keep it up. What equipment are you using? My amp just blew and I have been taking advantage (read: mourning the loss) of the situation by cleaning up my technique, since sans amp and distortion + note clarity is the key. Well I'm using a Crate amp thats about 15 watt, piece of shit. The guitar I'm using is a no make which was really cheap, my Jackson's out of commission at the moment. I'm gonna re-record this when I've learned it properly with no mistakes soon and see how it is then, I literally wrote it and recorded it. I kept fucking up trying to remember what comes next haha. I really wish I had some people who liked metal to jam with, I'm not arsed about being in a band, but jamming would be fun. |
Author: | hellraiser_xes [ Tue May 05, 2009 9:09 am ] |
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I can't download the file, man. Temporarily unavailable. Did you take it off? |
Author: | Metalhead_Bastard [ Tue May 05, 2009 2:58 pm ] |
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No, I'll try and sort it out. |
Author: | hellraiser_xes [ Wed May 06, 2009 3:23 am ] |
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It works now! Hey it's cool stuff man. I like the part at 3.39 onwards. Pretty creepy. So do you have a band to jam this? |
Author: | Metalhead_Bastard [ Wed May 06, 2009 2:44 pm ] |
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No, I wish I did but ooooh well. If I had a band I could actually get some satisfaction out of it, haha. Writing lyrics and finishing the song would be good. |
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