Metal Reviews

I think Zad molestated his words a bit too much. Some parts are confusing and less alliteration and whatnot would likely have kept it from dipping in spots. Have you ever heard some rap songs, or even real songs, that are flowing well, making sense and then come this line or verse that makes no sense, they obviously said it because a word or two rhymed? For instance:

Got a group to troop, with a shoop de shoop
Shoot hoop then scoop, on this loop to loop
Goin off and off, not soft of course
Just black and back to go back and forth

That's from Run DMC's "Tougher Than Leather." What the fuck does it mean? Anyway, otherwise the poem is really good, I just think there's a little too much spice.

Fucking vote judges. Jesus, do I have to line your ass cracks with peanut butter every time I wanna motivate ya'll, or just some of the time. Because the whole process is really getting on my nerves. Lately. Before, it was fun. But, not anymore. So VOTE.




It WAS fun, wasn't it?

I vote Dee (Lizardtail)

Zad, yours wasn't flowing enough for my taste, sorry

NP
Jane Birkin, Serge Gainsbourg "Je T'Aime... Moi Non Plus" (a classic album from 1969)

Lizzy the lizard gets the vote

.:crast:.

Jew.

Zadok. Come together with your hands. Save me. I'm together with your plans.

NOOooooOOOooooooooo!!! None of that!



Zadith quoted Larry the Cable Guy so that swings my vote in his favor, since I still can't make head or tails of anything either of you two wrote.



Vote: Zad

good luck in the finals, Zad.

anyone want to hazard a guess at what mine was about?

ummm was it about Ninjas?

Zadster is on a madster streak.

Lizzy, just like Kathy, you were totally mellow about coming into this. You thought you'd get mocked, but you wiped the floor with alot of the material that was produced. Solid stuff, dude~! Wanna face Kathy in a 3rd place match? Just for fun, and the sake of a good time, of course. Let me know. Thanks for playing, both you and Kathy. Upset Kings!

Zad, goodwork. Nuts, it really is nuts! We gave him a second chance, and he dominated the board. Finals are set, and it's safe to say we have two seriously talented writers in the finals.