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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 2:49 pm 
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Metalhead_Bastard wrote:
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You think your political bullshit will sustain us
I'll rip a hole in that shitty suit
And cram a knife up your anus


Lyrics to a politically charged 20 second grind song.


20 seconds?! Must be a hell of a breakdown in there.


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Zad wrote:
Metalhead_Bastard wrote:
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You think your political bullshit will sustain us
I'll rip a hole in that shitty suit
And cram a knife up your anus


Lyrics to a politically charged 20 second grind song.


20 seconds?! Must be a hell of a breakdown in there.


Ooooh, there will be. When I make it one day.


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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2006 2:58 pm 
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Entrapment, like you
Who seeks to grind down
The expression of fondness with a snarl,
And chain right to wrong by your deeds foul...

I despise you,
Your militant
Ignorance shines
Forth like diamonds on the river bed.
Express denial of comfort gained, friendship lost
With just one word, one opening and closing of the mouth.

I unlock your mind
So beautiful
And peer inside,
Anachronies, neoclassic renditions of blasphemy,
Building blocks of hatred, a third party
Has touched what is mine by right.

Anger hasn't turned to lust,
Nor is rage dissolved by memories
Of times past, when we were good together
And this interloper was not yet here,
And this intruder spoils that which we hold so dear.

No longer true brethren, locked together like knives
Weld together, held together as one.
Boy meets girl - again, it has begun.
And the cycle goes on, and important lives
Converge: you and I meant nothing after all.

So I turn from the arms once open,
I shun the imploring gaze,
And head instead for pastures new
Where the past is as yet unwritten.
For helpfully they inform me:
Plenty more fish in the sea,
'Friend...'
Plenty more fish in the sea,
But it came too little, too late for you, and for me.


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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 5:12 pm 
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No takers? This thread needs stickying...

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Come away with me,
Flee the fear and guilt.
From this careless morality
Watch as reality tilts...

Profound meanderings on the path to thralldom,
All lead to the mirror of your soul.
That pedantic voice will burn down our kingdom
Before it has fufilled its final role.

Give in to regret, achieve nothing but panic,
I left my sympathy with the radioactive corpses
Of newborn babes, leftovers of a conflict sick.
Valueless, like your present tears, leaked from the aborted.

Pain only lasts as long as you allow it.
The survivor chooses when to cease everything,
The doomed to fail knows it from the start:
Victory over those lumps of clay in your heart.

The trail of fears ends before the mind has adjusted
And the meal digested
By sinners subjective
To where you're coming from.
Life emboldened by the blade in my hand
And the blood singing in my veins,
Until they meet
And greet
In a big bang greater than any before...

Or,

Fall like he did from the huge height
And leave your insides spread out on the ground:
A museum piece, a wondrous sight,
Until come the vermin, the rat, the hound.
They feed on you in life and death,
You can smell his spirit on their breath.

So I give in to the whim
And build my funeral pyre.
A final resting place, as my eyes grow dim
To seal my fate in a pillar of fire...

I choose not:

To accept resolutions final, from a deity subliminal
Or to show the world how my thought has unfurled.

To show remorse for hating the sun
Smothering light uncovering all the deeds I've done.

To apologise for my darkness, for my reflections of starkness.
For the trail marked with sound, for the words in your ear.
Forgiving for this heart so bound, for this unforgivable tear
That rolls down your cheek and tastes of our life, so bleak...

I choose to fight on,
And on, and on, forever anon.
To clear my head of torment
For one moment of clarity

That enwraps me with tendrils of luscious life,
That, far from peace, instead increases my strife,
That obliges me a million times to strangers and friends,
That for the first time in a long time, my wounds it binds and mends.

So I crawl on
Under the weight of myself
And the world on my shoulders
Causes my back to bend.

(So he staggers on
Under the weight of his thoughts
And the world on his shoulders
Causes his back to break...)

But still we journey ahead
And don't look back for fear of the dead...


That bit in brackets is supposed to be read at the same time as the paragraph just before...


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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 5:30 pm 
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Zad, you're a prolific artist these days. What's up?


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PostPosted: Sun May 28, 2006 2:35 pm 
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Kathaarian wrote:
Zad, you're a prolific artist these days. What's up?


It just writes itself. I channel it through my fingers. Or something.


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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 6:26 am 
Here are some haikus (5-7-5) and tankas (5-7-5-7-7):

PROCESSION

"Wonder me a tale,"
Begged a poor man, almost gone
"Wonder me a tale"

MIRACLE

If you die tonight
I shall not cry in your name
But if you do not...

SHINE

Trust the morning sun
For it will always bring light
Fear the coming night

RIDE

"Did I miss the sea?"
Questioned a man, long since loved
"She said she'd meet me..."

SLEEP NOW

And for that one word
That I hold so dear—it's clear
When beauty rests near

DIMENSION 8:10

Seamless, dream to dream
Thoughts wrap themselves around thoughts
Another strange world

AT THE GATES

"Father! Is that you?"
Cried a lonely, dying man
A smile, and then peace

ONE'S MIND

"Do I claim to be?"
Shouted a child—eyes afire
I was quite confused
And said, "To whom do you shout?"
"Exactly, friend! Exactly!"

ODD WAYS

I came upon men
Wandering—aimlessly so
They spoke in odd ways
"The eyes speak of love," said one
"Yes, but they lie!" spoke another

(WTF?? That last line is 8 syllables! Good thing I can add! I fucking published that one. :evil: )


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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 1:02 pm 
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Lover's Blood

Put my tit in your hand and lick my hair strand by strand
Now, put your fist in my ass and please do not forget the glass
Thank you sir, now I bleed
Rub it up and down your sleeve
Now, blood from my ass is what you got
And I love you so, so thank me not


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Quote:
LIE CHEAT STEAL
It's a neverending wheel
Of your devious deeds
LIE CHEAT STEAL
You just do what feel
To meet your own needs

Read the last page of a book
Then start from the beggining
It doesn't matter if you cheat
So long as your winning

LIE CHEAT STEAL
It's a neverending wheel
Of your devious deeds
LIE CHEAT STEAL
You just do what you feel
To meet your own needs

If it's me
With whom you're messin'
Then I'm gonna have to teach you a lesson
Scum

(Solo, preferably a good one)

You lie, cheat and steal motherfucker
But now your through
Time to have a word with me
Or two

LIE CHEAT STEAL
It's a neverending wheel
Of your devious deeds
LIE CHEAT STEAL
You just do what you feel
To meet your own needs


Bits in capitals are gang shouted, imagine an Anthrax style song with a mosh bit in there somewhere. I bought a book today, and on the bus home I was tempted to look at the last page and thought of this.


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 7:25 am 
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I will feature more of my poetry later.

I am not sure if this poem is finished, being as how I may become inspired to write something in the same feeling/vein soon. My writing form when it comes to poetry is not as organized as what I have seen on this thread, so I will just type it in the same form that I write it in. I do not title anything.

the locusts gather
around their
pillar of lies

to worship
their parasitic god
at dusk

the peasant
lies impaled
upon a stake

for all to
devour

the savage
dances before
the indigo flames

of the burning
temple
in its collapse

the moonlit river
is overrun

the savage
falls upon
the scorched meadow


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Paradox, I like it-death metal lyrics!


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Thanks, man. I may seem that way; in the orginal written version, in the third stanza, I used "placed" instead of "impaled", but I decided to go with impaled because I thought it felt more vivid.


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 8:20 pm 
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Infinity


My Penis


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Dago wrote:
Infinity


My Penis


you sick sick SICK sailorman! this is the poetry thread, not the random-mention-my-little-ding-a-ling-thread :roll: :wink:


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Fingon wrote:
Dago wrote:
Infinity


My Penis


you sick sick SICK sailorman! this is the poetry thread, not the random-mention-my-little-ding-a-ling-thread :roll: :wink:



Yeah, What the fuck, Men?! :wink:

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 7:27 am 
I'm thinking about including a CD with my next book, spoken word shit Ani Difranco style. The poems on the CD won't be in the book, I don't think. Anyway, here is one I'm thinking of including:

EYESORE

Here I am, everywhere you said I would never be
So believe me when you see me and I'm speaking feelings freely
All these visions that you never wanted to see
Because I exist beyond my control, my soul, a hole
Deep and dark, alone...I breathe, my life, cold
As I place my finger, I pray I'm too strong for the trigger
And the cold metal reality, I get smaller and it grows bigger
Am I too proud for the rope, following this misguided hope
To the end of the barrel, the center of the scope
Am I too scarred and hardened for the edge
Wrists upturned as I traverse the crumbling ledge
Above the living, the dying, the dead
These questions pounding inside the walls of my head
Yes, this is my prison in which all I write is pain I've bled
But, nevertheless, the words are read
So I exist beyond your control
My life in pieces, but each piece, a whole
Understand that I am not you
I am not for you, but all this...you already knew
So I walk away with the taste of blood and war
The sign on the road reads: I Don't Care Anymore
And this is home and I am free, but I'll always be...an eyesore


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I will kill you with my dick
And show no remorse
I know, it's fuckin' sick
I'll ride you like a horse

Smashing your teeth
Breaking your skin
Revealing the bone
Concealed within

The meaty manhook
Instrument of death
I unzip my pants
Breath your last breath

Your gonna die
And you don't know why
My penis is hungy

Cannibalistic
Malevolant
Sadistic

Your eyes
Look up up in shock
Your face caved in
By my cock

I will kill you with my dick
And show no remorse
I know, it's fuckin' sick
I'll ride you like a horse

I laugh in the depravity
I've finished the mission

I fill up the cavity
And sink my hook like in fishin'

HAHAHAHAHA
I KILLED YOU WITH MY DICK
HAHAHAHAHA
IT'S FUNNY
AND FUCKIN' SICK
HAHAHAHAHAHA
NO REMORSE
RIDDEN LIKE A HORSE
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA


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PostPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 7:37 am 
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her hair
is a flowing sky
of dawn

that rises
upon an
ashen sky

a stream of
gold, in the
raven night

a soft cascade
of silk

her skin
woven with
gorgeousity

the flesh
of a rose
in spring

an imbrued
lily in
summer

an azure
autumn sun
in her eyes

------

dusk lay
solemn
upon her corpse

a scar
within the
scorched meadow

passion torn
asunder

writhing in
the rhythm
of agony

the supreme
tear within

mercy lies
apart

hate bearing
torture, a
sadistic divine

a fist in
the cunt of the
bleak horizon

The meaning of the latter poem is about a women who was raped and tortured to death, and this ultimately symbolizes Earth.


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I read the first one, and was like ''this man's in lurve!", and then read the second and was like "not any more!"

Both are very good, though. Think I prefer the first, but only because of my secret softy side.


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Numbed by the constant putrid ditty that you insist on singing,
My sister, no longer is the sun the centre of my world.
Enflamed by the constant passing, motions me, over me, this ritual begins anew.

Increased by the body mass, feeding frenzy.
Kith and kin denied in the face of greed,
And yet the expectations never cease,
And yet you continue, before me, to bleed.


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