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I drank a lot tonight
It's time for bed
But I'm spinning in my head
Oh fucking hell


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Damn shit wack.


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Damn 3 posts.


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Some lyrics I might use for my band. We play thrash, so I don't care if it's gay, the ending is supposed to be funny so don't be gay. Anything you think I should altar or any comments just jump right in. Good or bad be honest:

In the catacombs death awaits
Soon you will see
Hell's black gates
Enter the darkness
Unbearable pain
You'll never walk the earth again

Your final resting place (x3)

The Catacombs

The tunnels are a maze
And you’ll be lost for days
Until you finally meet your demise
Soon you shall see
That you’ll never go free
Stare into the reaper’s eyes

You final resting place (x3)

The Catacombs

Losing your mind
In the darkness you’re blind
You only hope for death
You should have turned back
Whilst you had the chance
Soon you will breathe your last breath

Your final resting place (x3)

The Catacombs

In the darkness-red eyes
Full of hatred and despise
Those of the evil undead
You try to flee
But with demonic glee
The beast rips off your head

Your final resting place (x3)

The Catacombs


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Up to the 'beast rips your head off' bit, my only problem is how bog-standard thrash they are. If you did some stream-of-consiousness porn stuff that we're so good at, and somehow fit it in to the music, that would be original. Get you noticed...


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This came about after trying to write an emo poem, Jeff's fault. I couldn't keep it up, however, and it goes weird of its own accord. Enjoy.
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The Conversation/The Conservation

Sleeping, but inside I sense that you're awake, as your eyelids flutter.
Touching, but outside I feel that you're dying, as your breath shortens.
Slowly we await the sun, dawn of a new day, life in the gutter.
Silent, but there's a thousand things I want to say, held back by caution,
Haunted by ghosts of what passed and caused you pain I should have taken...

But I cannot bear the parasite for you, that miniature philosopher
Already forming and taking a shape unbound by stimulants real
Or imaginary, swirling like a cosmos inside our minds, joined
With the simple act of surgery. A cut, a stitch, a joint.

"Your donation to the continued survival of humanity is appreciated."
So speaks the cremater, the master of ceremonies, sluggard, my despairing of
"Overpopulation? Call in the soldiers, to hack and slay
God's natural way
Making room for more." And all for the ignorant to
Journey on. Is this really what we're doing? Is it too
Late? Nothing a coat-hanger can't solve. Doubtful, you reject. And I'm left
Where I started.
Staring out of the window
Watching the pain flow by
And wondering why the fuck I bother
When it's so easy to just
Die.


Same sort of idea, but taken in a different direction. Basically saying, leave Noodles alone, he's more alive than most of us. It's also reacting to whoever said socialists were lazy and over-relied on people. So, take that.
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I Care A Lot

Start with the narrow end, slide it in gently - no senseless violence.
Whispering to myself, we grip with one hand and carve with another
Message the unison of aggressive, to the former entropy that failed
And they called me weak, because I cared for them.

As the day goes on, the way gets wider - plenty of lubrication needed.
Whimpering, the panic grows, stimulation or mutilation? The groans start to come...
Abruptly cut off from the source, you survive best as you can, godly being
That called me weak, because I care for them.

Evening is here, all is over and it's in as far as it will go,
Sweating blood, there's not much more you can take. Will we break?
Emotions are nothing to be afraid of, it's the people that scare me
The ones who call me weak, because I still care for them.


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What, you're all stunned into tearful silence? Comment, bitches.


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THRASH N BURN

Thrash is the answer
Spreading like cancer
Soon it’ll get you too
In battle there’s no law
So join the damned war
Thrash ‘til death or die

Thrash n Burn (x)

The soundtrack to violence
Breaking the silence
We’ll rape and pillage tonight
Fall to your knees
And embrace the disease
Fight for metal that’s right
Killing the faggots
Those cheap lowly maggots
The posers will burn tonight

Thrash n Burn (x)

SOLO


All we have so far.

Zad, I liked the first one better but it was a tad long, second one was OK.


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Metalhead_Bastard wrote:
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THRASH N BURN

Thrash is the answer
Spreading like cancer
Soon it’ll get you too
In battle there’s no law
So join the damned war
Thrash ‘til death or die

Thrash n Burn (x)

The soundtrack to violence
Breaking the silence
We’ll rape and pillage tonight
Fall to your knees
And embrace the disease
Fight for metal that’s right
Killing the faggots
Those cheap lowly maggots
The posers will burn tonight

Thrash n Burn (x)

SOLO


All we have so far.

Zad, I liked the first one better but it was a tad long, second one was OK.


Thanks. And that's not bad, although what's with the homophobia? :shock:


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Zad wrote:
Metalhead_Bastard wrote:
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THRASH N BURN

Thrash is the answer
Spreading like cancer
Soon it’ll get you too
In battle there’s no law
So join the damned war
Thrash ‘til death or die

Thrash n Burn (x)

The soundtrack to violence
Breaking the silence
We’ll rape and pillage tonight
Fall to your knees
And embrace the disease
Fight for metal that’s right
Killing the faggots
Those cheap lowly maggots
The posers will burn tonight

Thrash n Burn (x)

SOLO


All we have so far.

Zad, I liked the first one better but it was a tad long, second one was OK.


Thanks. And that's not bad, although what's with the homophobia? :shock:


We were trying to write the cheesiest song ever and meant faggots as a insult to 'posers' I've just realised we're gonna have to change it. I thought that bit was hilarious aswell. :cry:


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I have a pimple on my belly
It looks kind of smelly
Out came some gooey jelly
I hate R. Kelly


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I have a pimple on my belly
It looks kind of smelly
Out came some gooey jelly
I hate R. Kelly


:lol: :lol: :lol:

fucvking ell


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THRASH N BURN

Thrash is the answer
Spreading like cancer
Soon it’ll get you too
In battle there’s no law
So join the damned war
Thrash ‘til death or die

Thrash n Burn (x2)

The soundtrack to violence
Breaking the silence
We’ll rape and pillage tonight
Fall to your knees
And embrace the disease
Fight for metal that’s right
There’s a score to be settled
So make sure you’re metal
The posers will burn tonight

Thrash n Burn (x2)

SOLO

Die
Change your ways or die
Hate
Hate for those untrue
Kill
Kill those who do not thrash
Death
Death awaits you

Breaking down walls
And thrashing around
Mosh to the metal sound
Layin’ posers to waste
Givin’ ‘em a taste
Of what real thrash metal’s about
Now it’s your turn
To thrash n burn
Don’t let us down

Thrash n Burn (x2)


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 6:11 pm 
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Zad wrote:
This came about after trying to write an emo poem, Jeff's fault. I couldn't keep it up, however, and it goes weird of its own accord. Enjoy.
Quote:
The Conversation/The Conservation

Sleeping, but inside I sense that you're awake, as your eyelids flutter.
Touching, but outside I feel that you're dying, as your breath shortens.
Slowly we await the sun, dawn of a new day, life in the gutter.
Silent, but there's a thousand things I want to say, held back by caution,
Haunted by ghosts of what passed and caused you pain I should have taken...

But I cannot bear the parasite for you, that miniature philosopher
Already forming and taking a shape unbound by stimulants real
Or imaginary, swirling like a cosmos inside our minds, joined
With the simple act of surgery. A cut, a stitch, a joint.

"Your donation to the continued survival of humanity is appreciated."
So speaks the cremater, the master of ceremonies, sluggard, my despairing of
"Overpopulation? Call in the soldiers, to hack and slay
God's natural way
Making room for more." And all for the ignorant to
Journey on. Is this really what we're doing? Is it too
Late? Nothing a coat-hanger can't solve. Doubtful, you reject. And I'm left
Where I started.
Staring out of the window
Watching the pain flow by
And wondering why the fuck I bother
When it's so easy to just
Die.


Same sort of idea, but taken in a different direction. Basically saying, leave Noodles alone, he's more alive than most of us. It's also reacting to whoever said socialists were lazy and over-relied on people. So, take that.
Quote:
I Care A Lot

Start with the narrow end, slide it in gently - no senseless violence.
Whispering to myself, we grip with one hand and carve with another
Message the unison of aggressive, to the former entropy that failed
And they called me weak, because I cared for them.

As the day goes on, the way gets wider - plenty of lubrication needed.
Whimpering, the panic grows, stimulation or mutilation? The groans start to come...
Abruptly cut off from the source, you survive best as you can, godly being
That called me weak, because I care for them.

Evening is here, all is over and it's in as far as it will go,
Sweating blood, there's not much more you can take. Will we break?
Emotions are nothing to be afraid of, it's the people that scare me
The ones who call me weak, because I still care for them.
The first one reminds me of katatonia, the second one is mean :evil:

I started writing a poem, I got this line:
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With acceptance
I have found love within the emptyness
Quite pathetic
But all at once utterfly fulfilling


then i realized the lyrics to Tool's reflection went:

Quote:
Defeated I Concede and move closer. I may find comfort here
I may find peace within the emptiness. How pitiful.


DAMNIT I CANT HELP BUT RIP SHIT OFF >_<


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btw are people who think maynard's lyrics are cryptic or don't make sense retarded?

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I know the pieces fit cuz I watched them fall away
mildewed and smoldering, fundamental differing,
pure intention juxtaposed will set two lovers souls in motion
disintegrating as it goes testing our communication
the light that fueled our fire then has burned a hole between us so
we cannot see to reach an end crippling our communication.

I know the pieces fit cuz I watched them tumble down
no fault, none to blame it doesn't mean I don't desire to
point the finger, blame the other, watch the temple topple over.
To bring the pieces back together, rediscover communication.

The poetry that comes from the squaring off between,
And the circling is worth it.
Finding beauty in the dissonance.

There was a time that the pieces fit, but I watched them fall away.
Mildewed and smoldering, strangled by our coveting
I've done the the math enough to know the dangers of a second guessing
Doomed to crumble unless we grow, and strengthen our communication

cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion

between supposed lovers
between supposed brothers.

And I know the pieces fit.


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the ticking
of clocks
is
but a whisper

her velvet eyes
reflecting
the dawn

an indigo shiver
through
the daylight

the wailing
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Why was that mean, Jeff?


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Maynard's lyrics aren't cryptic, just crappy.


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Dead Machine wrote:
Maynard's lyrics aren't cryptic, just crappy.



:D :D :D :!: :D :D :D

Hey, l'il bro. Glad to see you're surviving NY.


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Beh, boredom is my terminal enemy, not muggers.

Nice to see you as well.


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