Poetry Competition: R1 M4 Tlaloc vs. Slayer of Kings

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:10 pm

Natura Omnis Vincit I

Whenever the sun shines
She paints my face in smiles
And again, and again
Oblivious to it all
All but the sun,
in turn a reflection
of you.

And when you fade
there you are again
And again, and again

You are the summer's day
And the child's laughter
And again, I cannot help
to think of you again and

Again, I falter to continue.

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:20 pm

I don't think I've seen Tlaloc around these last couple of days... I hope he makes it.

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sun Jun 03, 2007 11:13 pm

24 hours have passed.

Goat · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 1:19 am

They have. We'll do what we did for Define Infinity and give him the voting time as well, otherwise, you da winner.

Anonymous · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 1:25 am

It would be a very shitty way to win.

DevotedWalnut · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 1:36 am

At least you didn't have to go up against DI. Ouch.

Tlaloc · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 6:56 am

*puff puff puff*

Sorry I'm late, been very very busy lately.

Ok, now I don't have a poem ready so I'll just make one up right now...

Return of the Feotus Eater

Beyond the grave,
Beyond the skies,
I plunge into the juicy
Spread of shaven thighs.

I, the mighty Feotus Eater,
Return to Earth as a parking meter
Nobody suspects the parking meter
Until I tunnel into her beaver.

'Accident' they cry,
'Freakish' they sigh,
But nobody knows who it really is,
Or the name of the enemy to decry.

Three feet of pole,
And one foot of head,
I impale her for her feotus,
And move on once fed.

'Who would shove a parking meter,
Up this poor woman's beaver?',
Don't you know who I really am,
I'm the mighty Feotus Eater!

OldSchool · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 7:31 am

Goat · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:52 am

Tlaloc.

Mintrude · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 3:51 pm

Tough one, but I'm going with SOK

Anonymous · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:09 pm

Sometimes I think we'd be better served with a fixed theme, as the entries we've seen so far are miles apart, making it very hard to make an objective comparison of the two.

SilkCrimsonMoon · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:21 pm

Slayer of Kings.

Anonymous · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:35 pm

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DevotedWalnut · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 8:13 pm

Even though SOK voted for my pathetic attempt, I am going to go with Tlaloc.

Anonymous · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 9:23 pm

Ingrate.

DevotedWalnut · **Posted:** Mon Jun 04, 2007 9:24 pm

I think my vote doesn't matter, your still going to win.

Goat · **Posted:** Tue Jun 05, 2007 12:22 am

Slayer Of Kings wrote:

Sometimes I think we'd be better served with a fixed theme, as the entries we've seen so far are miles apart, making it very hard to make an objective comparison of the two.

Fair enough, but I wanted the creative process here to be completely free.

Times up! Six votes for Slayer Of Kings, two for Tlaloc. SoK wins!

DevotedWalnut · **Posted:** Tue Jun 05, 2007 12:25 am

Quote:

Times up! Six votes for Slayer Of Kings, two for Tlaloc. SoK wins!

DevotedWalnut wrote:

I think my vote doesn't matter, your still going to win.

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