Poet Comp Round II Match III- Jaden vs. Noodles

Caligula_K · **Joined:** Mon Nov 22, 2004 8:56 pm **Posts:** 3561

Since nobody else seems to be taking the initiative to make this thread....

Since this is being made so late, I'd say they should get until tommorow at midnight to post, and voting can end sunday at 11:59. Anyone else agree?

Anyway, good luck

noodles · **Posted:** Sat Jul 14, 2007 3:33 am

Her eyes were green and delicate
soft plants unmoving in the sun
the light's glint a brilliant flower
also a familiar darkness behind them
playfully daring him to continue the act
anticipation pushed breath from her lungs
though he felt it most clear in her eyes
and how her tongue ran over her lips

from anticipation to interest
from interest to discomfort
from discomfort to agony
from agony to terror
from terror to nothing

his hands freed her neck as his lips took hers
she pulled the air from his lungs
a flood of life from him back to her
with it a unique sensation

from nothing to :wub:

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:23 am

Oops, yea I'll get something written either tonight (maybe not, it's late, but we'll see), or sometime tomorrow.

Anonymous · **Posted:** Sat Jul 14, 2007 9:14 am

The Killing Machine

Avert your ears at once,
Silence that sinister sound
That scorns your very soul,
Else face the darkest toll.

Like roots in the ground,
It tangles young minds
With a message of evil
And satanic upheaval!

The Killing Machine I say
Would be a far better name,
But I guess I’ll have to settle
For Heavy fuckin’ Metal.

unknownkadath666 · **Posted:** Sat Jul 14, 2007 1:39 pm

jaden

Dago · **Posted:** Sat Jul 14, 2007 4:06 pm

Jaden!

Caligula_K · **Joined:** Mon Nov 22, 2004 8:56 pm **Posts:** 3561

Jaden

Kathaarian · **Posted:** Sat Jul 14, 2007 7:12 pm

The fag

noodles · **Posted:** Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:28 pm

i knew i should have stuck to poems about varg

EdgeOfForever · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 9:56 pm

Jaden.

Goat · **Posted:** Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:39 am

Jeff's reminds me of that pop-punk band song about a girl raping a boy. Can't remember the band's name, but the song was called... I should shut up whilst I'm ahead, shouldn't I?

Jeff. Not that it matters, but it's the thought that counts.

noodles · **Posted:** Mon Jul 16, 2007 2:38 am

Zad wrote:

I should shut up whilst I'm ahead, shouldn't I?

That would make an awesome pop-punk song title.

Caligula_K · **Joined:** Mon Nov 22, 2004 8:56 pm **Posts:** 3561

Well, I guess its over- Jaden wins 5-1, since votes for the fag have been encompassed in his direction. Zad, you up for creating Round 3?

Goat · **Posted:** Mon Jul 16, 2007 7:32 pm

Brahm_K wrote:

Well, I guess its over- Jaden wins 5-1, since votes for the fag have been encompassed in his direction. Zad, you up for creating Round 3?

Round three. A three-way, by coincidence.

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